“She’s not taking your calls or email.”
“No shit. You guys took my phone.” I scratched at imagined flea bites. “Then I need to speak to her.”
“Sorry, no direct communication of any kind, whatsoever. ”
“What? How can I explain or defend myself?”
“Defend? ‘Guilty as a scorpion’, she called you.”
Continued…
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Here’s the deal. Your site(s) will say one comment, from whoever, but those comments are not visible in the three iterations of the site. Oh well. This one is interesting. I touch on rules in the next bit of Kerrigan. Your mission, should you decide to accept it, is find the good lines in the wrong places, put them at the bottom and make decisions before you post. It’s one of the hardest things to learn to spot and a spare pair of eyes is best. But still.
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At this point, my time is so limited, I’m happy to get a few cogent sentences stitched together.
So, you’ve seen comments vanish? Or never post?
I’m renown for juxtaposing thoughts in a sentence/paragraph. Too many near-fatal accidents as a child.
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Juxtaposition is one thing, derailment another. Trust me, I fight that fight every time the screen lights up. I’ve been writing in bed on a damn ipad with the TV on in the background. I get it. I had someone tell me last week, aside from don’t be a pussy, to not get so distracted it did something stupid. Like pull out in front of an 18 wheeler. However I do that every time I write.
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