VEV-38 became adamant against Control’s insistence…
Discovery we experienced, not.
:: Discovered, you were!
Evidence, you have?
:: Xpecies channels of communication flooded
by visually recorded evidence, they have.
News, this is?
It may have been that the quantum entangled viewing device suffered a graviton space-burp, however, it is more likely that the primitive observations reported by this xpecies finally penetrated the humorless exo-skull of Control.
:: Indeed. Viral conspiracy assumed, it will be.
VEV-38 shrugged his chitinous shoulders. The rasping sound generated a pleasing sensation in his mate’s aural spicules. VEV began his report…
Detected reduced activity this greening season, we have.
Dormant, xpecies appears to have become.
Arteries of transport, vacant they are.
Collapse, we predict.
:: Species history, you should review. Devastation of numbers and recovery,
experienced xpecies has. Expect similar results, you should.
VEV-38 reclined in his netting. The quantum viewer automatically adjusted to follow the monocular focus of his prime-eyes. Throughout his collective life-cycle he’d witnessed numerous species collapse. The galaxy was literred with them. The evidence he and JIN-23 had collected thus far pointed to systemic failure.
JIN-23 completed her analysis of the planet’s atmosphere and jacked into her own qu-viewer. She and VEV had arrived at identical conclusions: this species was doomed. She offered her observation…
Atmospheric temperatures risen to crippling levels, they have.
Trigger points of cascading failure, experienced the environment has.
The existential cliff, xpecies marches foolishly toward.
JIN drew in shuddering breaths along her thorax.
Repeat, history does not always perform.
Often, collapse occurs.
Admit this, Control does?
Another longer and more worrying space-burp ticked by. JIN’s intimate antenna drifted over to lightly touch her mate’s. He returned the gesture as they waited for Control’s response.
:: Monitor the xpecies, continue you will.
Repeat, history may not,
but rhyme, it often does.
Wasn’t going to comment on the Yoda-speak thing. It was obvious, and it was the way you wanted to do it.
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How can those two be getting turned on watching that?
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Aliens. Inscrutable.
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Of those moments this one is – became adamant – when to the adverb selling out in the sentence better works. Better or, reference given to act adamant becoming. Adamantly one opposed being to
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This reminds me of the way H.P. Lovecraft if he were a 21st Century science-fiction writer (instead of a 20th Century horror writer) might sum up the current world situation.
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Me too. More pidgin computereze. Karn Evil 9 3rd Movement.
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We are from France. We are from France.
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Yoda speak.
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I think what I like best about this is the way you very delicately developed the relationship between the two characters–so much emotional depths in so few words:-)
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Thanks, Suzy-Q. I’m afraid a daily submission schedule will exceed your interest level. Alas, I’m in it to the end. Besides, what else do I have to do but write?
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I’ll get caught up eventually–you have such a wonderful imagination that I hate missing anything you’ve done:-)
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Damn, we’re doomed. Anything remotely intelligent can see it happening….”but rhyme, it often does.” Nice phrasing. You’re really stepping out, Anony. Keep it comin’
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Thanks George. I’m just winging it into the hurricane.
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